Sentence Fluency Activity
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Read this next paragraph aloud. My horse is white. He has one blue eye and one brown eye. He is friendly. He likes when we brush him. He snuggles his nose into us when we brush him. He is fun to ride. He is my horse and I am glad. You probably noticed that most of the sentences started the same way. Think of some different ways to change these sentences to make the story easier and more fun to read aloud. My friendly horse, Flash, has one blue eye and one brown eye. This majestic white creature loves when I brush his soft coat. I can tell because he snuggles his nose into me and whinnies. He also loves to race through the corn fields behind our barn. Whoosh! Flash gallops through the stalks like a Nascar racer flying around a speedway. I clutch his mane and shriek with laughter. He is a wonderful horse! This story had different sentence beginnings and added a bit more detail. It made the story more interesting for the reader. Try to add some different beginnings to your story.
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